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General feedback from your first essay

I will also put this on ultranet, but here it is as well.

Tip: pick out a few points which need improvement in your essay, and make those improvements. If you are already doing something right, congratulate yourself!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/wl4q1syt9reyhu3/Essay%201%20character%20change.pdf

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